The Importance of Cheerios
I
personally love breakfast. The thought
of juicy bacon and eggs with a grapefruit on the side is absolutely
mouth-watering to me. Throughout my high
school career, I made breakfast a priority.
I always wound up being the first person I knew to be awake every
morning because I would leave myself at least an hour and a half to shower, eat
breakfast, and then get to school. I
even would be late for school if it meant not having to compromise my coveted
breakfast hours. Kids called me crazy,
asking why I didn’t just sleep in or get to class on time and then eat a lot at
lunch. When you woke up today were you
late for school? If so, this could have
prompted you to skip breakfast and rush out the door, however, thanks to a
study conducted by students at the Harvard
School of Public Health from 1996-1999, I have accredited research to say that
this may not be the smartest idea.
Their
study was preformed to observe the same group of individual adolescents over
three years. They asked each participant
each year how often they ate breakfast, how well they did in school, and how
much exercise they got. What they found
was very interesting to me. The
overarching conclusion to their expansive study was that adolescents who
generally ate breakfast every day happened to have a much more healthy BMI
(body mass index, calculated from weight and height) than those who frequently
skipped breakfast. As it turns out,
adolescents who were eating breakfast every day also had more energy throughout
the day, enabling them to participate in getting more exercise, doing more
schoolwork effectively, and using less of their time playing video games and
computer games. The students who were of
a healthy weight at the start of the study, and each year reported frequently
skipping breakfast actually became more overweight as the years went on. They also reported less physical exercise and
as a whole reported having more trouble with their school work. Sounds like breakfast may be more important
than even I anticipated.
So
what should most people take away from this?
Well, although this study was done only on adolescents, research
indicates that both behavioral patterns and weight patterns that occur in
adolescent years are known to carry over into adult life and hold true for most
adults as well. The study states as a
way of justifying their own research, that although it wasn’t their research
that concluded this, that teen eating habits and the consequences of those
eating habits are likely to remain prominent throughout adulthood as well.
Some
people don’t eat breakfast because they say they don’t have time. I say no way.
I can eat a bowl of cereal with milk in three minutes flat. Even though a bowl of cereal may not look
like much, “cereal intake (hot and cold, per calorie and per cost) may provide
a healthy breakfast.” (Niklas) So stop
telling yourself you don’t have time for breakfast. Make time.
Breakfast food is delicious, relatively healthy, and can give you that
boost of energy you’re looking for when you stop at Starbucks and fill yourself
with the artificial energy that we call caffeine. I never miss breakfast no matter what, and I
have never once felt like I needed a cup of coffee. Instead, I do fairly frequently wake up
feeling starving and sluggish until I get at least my daily fix of cereal.
Berkley, CS, HRH Rockett, MW
Gillman, AE Field, and GA Colditz. "Longitudinal Study of Skipping
Breakfast and Weight Change in Adolescents." International Journal of
Obesity 27 (2003): 1258-266. Nature.com. Nature Publishing Group.
Web. 14 May 2013.
<http://www.nature.com/ijo/journal/v27/n10/full/0802402a.html>.
Nicklas TA,
McQuarrie A, Fastnaught C, O’Neil CE. Efficiency of breakfast consumption
patterns of ninth graders: nutrient-to-cost comparisons. J Am Diet Assoc 2002;
102: 226–233.
1.What food or eating practice is the author researching, and what are the reported health implications?
ReplyDeleteIn Eli's blog, he talks about the importance of eating breakfast. He makes the claim that eating breakfast is important in maintaining a healthy weight as well having more energy and focus throughout the day. In turn, those that do not eat breakfast also exercise less because of the lack of energy that they have.
2.In what ways is the scientific study rerwritten for a broader audience? What rhetorical and language choices are evident?
The study is re-written in a way that takes out all of the advanced language that studies use and makes it more understandable for the general audience. There is use of facts to help back up the claim and made the essay stronger.
3.What suggestions do you have for revision?
For revisions, there are a few spelling and grammar mistakes here and there that are easily fixed. Also, your second to last paragraph is a little confusing in the wording and I don't exactly understand what you are trying to say in it. If you have another study or such it would be a good addition to have. But, it was a good paper and I really enjoyed it!!
1) What food or eating practice is the author researching, and what are the reported health implications
ReplyDeleteThe author is researching the importance of eating breakfast as opposed to skipping it. Some of the concepts he explored where how breakfast is important in maintaing a healthy life style and also explored how it can help keep you more energized and aware. An implication he mentions is how if we skip breakfast we are more prone to become lazy and also miss on the opportunity to live a healthy life style.
2) In what ways is the scientific study re written for a broader audience?
What rhetorical and language choices are evident
The studies he found are rewritten in a way that he takes out the all of the scientific and fancy terms and keeps it at a nice and easy read as opposed to using the advanced language that these studies can use. Furthermore, his essay uses relevant studies which helps back up his claim.
3) Suggestions for revision
Maybe bring in another study to help make your paper a little stronger. Like Alex the second to last paragraph kinda threw me off as well so maybe revise that but over all it was very interesting and a good read.